假设你是李林,请给你的美国笔友Tom写一封E-mail,介绍你的英语老师Mr.Lee.
Dear Tom How are you recently ,Now,I will tell you something about. My English teacher Lee is 40years old.He has a very happy family.He is outgoing and get on well with students..We all like him because his lessons are very interesting.And he often help us with our English after class.He has many go英语作文,给你美国的笔友介绍一下你的学校生活和家庭生活。
我在外打拼多年,身心略显疲惫回到家乡的时候,心里总是充满了一股浓浓的暖流。感觉仿 佛有一杯甘甜在滋润着我心田,又似有一盏明灯照耀在我身旁,激励着我的斗志和激情。而当我将目光投向家乡的山水云间、花草丛间、人物群间时,我的心中又变 得豪情满怀。那曾经的往事历历在目,老师的关怀、母校的扶助、家乡的恩惠,一直是我记忆深处永不磨灭的烙印,让我感叹这个文明社会充满爱心,因为爱心传承 变得更加文明,也就让人心中一直满怀感恩心,感谢人间洋溢和谐情。 曾经幼小的我,生在农村,家境贫寒,没有享受过太多童年欢乐时光, 有的只是生活的艰难困苦。小学毕业的我,虽然以优异成绩考入镇上的重点中学,但因家里太穷,没指望再去念英语作文:假如你叫李林,你的笔友mike发邮件想要了解一下中国的端午节.请你根
假设你叫李林,正在读高三,你的好友张华最近给你来信,想了解你的近况,请你用英语给他写一封回信,告诉他进入高三以来你学习以及生活情况的变化,主要内容包括: 1.学习态度与学习压力的变化; 2.时间安排的变化; 3.你后期的打算(两点)。假如你叫WangMeng, 初中生活即将结束。三年中,你与同学们在一起学习,参加各种活动,互相帮助,合作学习
Dear Ling Feng, I would like to say thanks to you. Leaving the school and my classmates, I have so many words from my heart to say. Since we came to the school three years ago, we have been good friends. We studied and played together. I won’t forget how kind and friendly you are. I still remember when I was ill, you sent me to hospital and helped me with my lessons. When I was in trouble, you tried your best to help me and encouraged me to be brave. Thank you again for what you’ve done for me. All my best to you. Yours, Wang Meng |
试题分析:这篇短文以初中就要毕业了为背景,让我们对我们的同学写一封感谢信。题目中为我们设置好了彼此的身份,让我们以王蒙的身份给凌峰写感谢信。虽然题目中没有具体给出写作的内容,但是给了我们大概的要求,即在信中要表达清楚为什么要像他表示感谢,还要举出例子来,表达出自己的感受和想法。故写作时,我们不能泛泛的说一些感谢的话,还要有真实的例子。注意使用正确的语言和时态,并且表达要流畅完整,符合题目要求。 【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文,整篇短文表达流畅、完整,语言有节奏感,使用的词汇和句型也很丰富。在这篇短文中,在即将毕业之际,作者以王蒙的身份向自己的同学凌峰表示了感谢,短文中有书写作者感受的句子,也有具体的实例来说明为什么要感谢他。文章中较好的句式有,如since we came to the school three years ago, we have been good friends、I won’t forget how kind and friendly you are、When I was in trouble, you tried your best to help me and encouraged me to be brave等,这些句子中用到了感叹句、时间状语从句,和一些固定的短语和句型,为整篇文章增色不少。 |